Search from various English teachers...
Palestinian Territories flagArwa
Farewell I always hated goodbyes. They are all about tears, loneliness and pains. So what is the good about it? Why is it a goodbye not a badbye?! You know what? Sometimes it is better to say, " Goodbye! I'm happy that you are leaving! I do not want to see your face!" Some people are really suck. They deserve… No! I deserve a happy bye, a cheerful bye. I will miss Adri! She can always impress me by her thoughts and ideas. She is the one who made me walk on a cloud, touch the rainbow and sing with birds in a beautiful, shiny day. I owe her many smiles and happy times. I want to believe that she is only absent for a day or two then she is coming back to say, "Hi! How are you?" Well, the worst bye is the forever bye which means parting and leaving with no return, with no more hello. It really hurts. "Farewell! God knows when we shall meet again" William Shakespeare. Have a lovely day.

Corrections · 32

0

Farewell


I have always hated goodbyes. They are all about tears, loneliness and pains. So what is the good about it? Why is it a 'goodbye' and not a 'badbye'? You know what? Sometimes it is better to say, "Goodbye! I'm happy that you are leaving! I do not want to see your face!" Some people are really suck. They deserve… No! I deserve a happy bye, a cheerful bye.

I will miss Adri! She can always impress me by with her thoughts and ideas. (Or, 'I am impressed by...') She is the one who made me walk on a cloud, touch the rainbow and sing with birds on a beautiful, shiny day. I owe her many smiles and happy times. I want to believe that she is only absent for a day or two then she is coming back to say, "Hi! How are you?"

Well, the worst bye is the forever bye which means parting and leaving with no return; with no more hello. It really hurts.

"Farewell! God knows when we shall meet again" William Shakespeare.

Have a lovely day.

I always hated....    (but now I...)

I have always hated....  (and I still do...)

 

The present perfect (have hated) continues right up to the present moment. The simple past (I hated) sounds finished.

0

Farewell


I always hated goodbyes. They are all about tears, loneliness and pain. So what is the use? Why is it a goodbye not a "badbye"?! You know what? Sometimes it is better to say, " Goodbye! I'm happy that you are leaving! I do not want to see your face!" Some people really suck. They deserve… No! I deserve a happy bye, a cheerful bye.

I will miss Adri! She can always impress me with her thoughts and ideas. She is the one who made me walk on clouda, touch the rainbow and sing with the birds on a beautiful, shiny day. I owe her many smiles and happy times. I want to believe that she is only absent for a day or two and then she'll come back to say, "Hi! How are you?"

Well, the worst bye is the forever bye which means parting and leaving with no return, with no more hello. It really hurts.

"Farewell! God knows when we shall meet again" William Shakespeare.

Have a lovely day.

0
Thank you for making me a kitten:))))))
0
Haha, I think your entry now is about, "Animals". :)))))
0
Meow:)))

Want to progress faster?

Join this learning community and try out free exercises!

Don’t miss out on the opportunity to learn a language from the comfort of your own home. Browse our selection of experienced language tutors and enroll in your first lesson now!

Start Learning Today