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LOVE IS EVIL
If you ask me what I'm scared of
I'll say to fall in love completely
Only then will you know, the pain I feel from you
Lust can be controlled but controlling torture is impossible
Don’t worry it's not your fault, it's just hard for me to go through
Baby you had said: I will be lost without you
I feel the same way in my heart, always aiming back at you
Please don’t play games, it will be dangerous for you
I love you but I can not help you as my heart is as cold as snow
Sometimes to love is evil
I'm sorry that I see, my silence makes you uncomfortable
Maybe there just isn't enough strength of love for you
Babe, just take your time and go, no need to review
You know it’s too late to save our love
We can't be as we were before
I wish I could run to you
I believe in, "Platonic Love"
If need be I can pour my whole my heart out to you
Then you can my loving heart is still beating as I love you
Tears stream down both my cheeks before I raise the gun to my temple
Then you will see a love supernova on top of you
Here's another take on your poem.
I really like the end part that you wrote, about the head shot being like a supernova.
Love is like a ferris wheel, sometimes it makes you sick but it always comes around again hehehe
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