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LOVE IS EVIL If you ask me what I am scared of I would say only when fall in love hole Then will you know how painful the gift I get from you I can control the lust but stopping the torturous is impossible Don’t worry it is not your fault just it’s hard for me to go through Baby you had said: I will lost without you Yes the same is my heart always aiming right you Then please don’t play games it will be dangerous for you Even I love you but I can not help you as my heart frozen as snow Because sometimes the love is evil If my silent make you feel uncomfortable Maybe is I have no enough strength of love for you Then baby, just take your time to go and no need to review You know it’s too late to save our love though as wish I back to you It’s never the same feeling we ever feel I’m a believer of the Platonic Love If you want I can pour whole my heart out to you Then you can see the loving heart is still beating as I love you Tears stream down both of my cheeks before I put that gun to my temple Soon after you will see a new supernova on top of you

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LOVE IS EVIL

If you ask me what I'm scared of
I'll say to fall in love completely 
Only then will you know, the pain I feel from you
Lust can be controlled but controlling torture is impossible 
Don’t worry it's not your fault, it's just hard for me to go through

Baby you had said: I will be lost without you
I feel the same way in my heart, always aiming back at you
Please don’t play games, it will be dangerous for you
I love you but I can not help you as my heart is as cold as snow

Sometimes to love is evil

I'm sorry that I see, my silence makes you uncomfortable
Maybe there just isn't enough strength of love for you
Babe, just take your time and go, no need to review
You know it’s too late to save our love

We can't be as we were before

I wish I could run to you


I believe in, "Platonic Love" 
If need be I can pour my whole my heart out to you
Then you can my loving heart is still beating as I love you
Tears stream down both my cheeks before I raise the gun to my temple
Then you will see a love supernova on top of you   

 

Here's another take on your poem.


I really like the end part that you wrote, about the head shot being like a supernova.

Love is like a ferris wheel, sometimes it makes you sick but it always comes around again hehehe

 

 

 

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:D Yes
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My dearest Siny, I don`t like lack of love and also I do not like to be a selfish person.But about devil and evil.... you know how I think ;)))
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@Siny Adon: Excuse me, what do you mean?
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Then Seda is it so good?

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