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我的大大愿望 弟弟正处于青少年叛逆期,一点都不乖,在学校也不听老师的话,在家也不听爸爸妈妈的话,更让人头疼的是他在学校老是逃课,我想帮助他改正坏毛病,希望他能成熟一点。 所以我现在有一个愿望,我希望等我毕业有了工作以后,鼓励并资助他出去旅游,我希望他能通过旅游来增长阅历,了解世界各地的乡土人情,让他的思想更有深度和广度,我不期待也不要求他要有多大作为但一定要有思想,要有自已的见解和坚持,我希望他能成为一个正直,勇敢,无畏,善良人。我希望他能快乐幸福,自由自在。

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I want to do something right, but how could i know what is right and what is wrong. sometimes i confuse and try to calm down, i wish there is someone who could tell me what and how should i do so that i can do everything right. but i know that can't happen, so i still have to make a choice by myself no matter it is wrong or right. sometimes it is so tough to make a choice especially when you are not sure whether it is right or not, if your choice hurt some innocent person then what should you do? just ignoring  it or trying to make it right? i know that some person must be hurted because of me and i know i can't make it right just say "sorry " or feel sorry, there is nothing can be done to erase those injuris that you have made to others. maybe what i can do is try my best to fix it but that will not be the reason to forgive myself.

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