My hometown
My hometown is located in LinZhouShi in henan province, is a beautiful place. It is famous in the world for the red flag canal. The red flag canal is in the 1960 s, LinXian people in very difficult conditions, from mountain in shansi built into the mountainside led zhang Lin engineering. Is the key cultural relics protection unit, is the world called "artificial tianhe" in international is known as "the eighth wonder of the world". I love my hometown,and welcome you come to my hometown very much!!!
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Interesting post. I hadn't heard of the Red Flag Canal before, but it looks amazing from the pictures on the internet!
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My hometown
My hometown is located in LinZhouShi in Henan province, which is a beautiful place. It is famous in the world for the Red Flag Canal. The Red Flag Canal was built in the 1960s, LinXian people in very difficult conditions, from mountain in shansi built into the mountainside led zhang Lin engineering. Is the key cultural relics protection unit, is the world called "artificial tianhe" in international is known as "the eighth wonder of the world". I love my hometown,and welcome you to come to my hometown with open arms!!!
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The Red Flag Canal was built in the 1960s by the LinXian people in very difficult conditions. It was dug from the ShanXi mountainsides and engineered to lead water from the Zhang river into the canal. (???)
It has been listed for protection as a Key Cultural Relic Unit, is called the "artificial tianhe" around the world, and is internationally known as "the eighth wonder of the world".
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