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Sport at school Some people think that Sport at school is not important. Maybe they think that Maths or Science are more useful in daily life. What is more important that our heath? Without health we can do nothing else... Sport increases our life quality and if we are used to do it at school we will practice it. Someone who doent usually do Sport and one day he decide to do, it will make him feel better and better every day. On the other hand there are people who spend a very long time doing sports just for have a sculpted body. In that case, Sport are not very healthy and it become to be an illness. This kind of desease is as dangerous as anorexia.

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Sport at School.

Some people think that doing sports at school is not important.

Maybe they think that Maths or Science are more useful in daily life.

What is more important than our heath?

Without health we can do nothing else, sport increases our quality of life and if we are used to doing it at school we will practice it (and carry it in to the rest of our lives, and even introduce it to our children).


Someone who doesn't usually do sports but one day decides to, will feel better and better every day.

(They will feel a physical and mental benefit)


On the other hand there are people who spend a very long time doing sports just to have a, "sculpted body".

In those cases, sport is not very healthy and it becomes almost like an illness.

This kind of desease is as dangerous as anorexia.

 

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Well written.

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