It pay to be honest
As we all kown,telling lies is usually looked upon as an evil,because some people try to get benefit from dishonest means or try to conceal their faults.And now ,there are many dishonest phenomenon in our daily life.
So what shall we do to change this bad behavior ?Firstly ,I think we should be aware of the importance of the honesty. You kown , if we all tell lies to each other , so that everyone wears masks,how terrible it is!Also we can't have friends who can communicate with you heart by heart and we'll not believe everybody around you.And then , thinking about the benefit of the honesty.Honesty is the foundation of cooperation and also an honest person can make more friends.You kown an honest people can succeed at last.
Therefore ,taking all these factors into consideration,we can definitely come to the conclusion :Honest benefit,to be an honest person.
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It payS to be honest
As we all known,telling lies is usually looked upon as an evil,because some people try to get benefit from dishonest means or try to conceal their faults.And now ,there are many dishonest phenomenon in our daily life.
So what shall (should) we do to change this bad behavior ?Firstly ,I think we should be aware of the importance of the honesty. You known , if we all all of us tell lies to each other , so that everyone wears masks,how terrible it is!Also we can't have friends who cannot communicate with you heart by heart and we'll would not believe everybody around you us.And then , thinking about the benefit of the honesty.Honesty is the foundation of cooperation and also an honest person can make more friends.You known an honest people can succeed at last.
Therefore ,taking all these factors into consideration,we can definitely come to the conclusion :Honesty benefits,to be an honest person.
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Your english is pretty good.
Little thing to aware, punctuation.
And the logic in your entry is not fluent.
First, your conclution is importance of honesty, but your reasoning doesn't focus on this.
also the effect of tell lie,
then, logic lost all its way.
Therefor, ...
Your reasoning can't support your conclusion.
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