Can any TOEFL evaluator correct this Essay?
The question looks very simple, " Why I am learning English?" ,but the answer for it is complex, one reason for learning the language is that, it's mandatory for me to work in USA, as i need to score 26 in speaking out of 30. Earlier i tried 3 time to get the score but got only 24 once and 23 twice in TOEFL ibt.
The next reason to learn the language is to communicate well with my patient/clients for delivering health care to the maximum potential because if i dont communicate with them, i might miss some important clues while taking history for assesment, which is vital for planning treatment for them.
Another important reason is that, if i get job in USA, i need to develop a good rapport with my employer which won't be possible if i can't speak the language. Good rapport will develop only when i talk to them to express what i feel coherently and clearly.
The most important reason to learn English is because it's the global language so anywhere i go around the world i can communicate well with anybody in this world to express what i want to them, We Human's are unique from other living being by having effective communicating skill but the communication between different contry people are hindered as the language used among them are different but, English being universal global communicating language it narrows the communication gap between people of different contries with different language.
Thus i want to learn English to work in USA to create a good rapport with my employer and all people around the world and to deliver effective treatment to my patient/clients.
I would be great full if any TOEFL evaluator correct the above essay and i would like to choose the best teacher for training my speaking skill.
Thanks,
Regards,
Vijay
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