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First notebook entry: Introducing myself
Good afternoonmy friends!
My name is Gloria. I'm a Chinese girl from the city of Qufu, Shandong Province. And Qufu is the hometown of Confucius. I am a senior in the college. My major is Drama Theoryand I like to write short stories. I like drama and film.
I want to practice my English and to make friends with you.
Put the punctuation right after the word, then put a space after it.
The word Chinese is a proper noun, so it must be capitalized.
Welcome to italki.
First notebook entry: Introducing myself
Good afternoon ,my friends!
My name is Gloria.A chinese girl .
A girl from Qufu ,the city of Shandong Province .And Qufu is the hometown of Confucius.I am a senior in the college.My major is Drama Theory .And I like to write short stories.I like drama and film .
I want to practice my English and to make friends with you .
Very well written, welcome to italki. :)
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