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Psychology and Humanism

Seldom will I link psychology to humanism before. However, it frustratesd me quietquite a lot (frustrated me quite a bit or frusterated me a lot) this morning, so much so, that I cannot hold it in anymore/any longer. As a student majoreding in applyied psychology, the principle of caring and helping every client is most significant. Recently, a friend consulted me about her condition. For the sake of not misleading her, I reflected shared herthe details with my major teacher this morning, which what disgusted me was that she left offered only a few words and before turneding to other students around her on other topics, while leaving me with confusioned. HadHaving not gottenreceived an accurate answer, I insisted to stand in face of her and waited her answer. What the scene appeared in my eyes was that she actively talked with the other student about how do find subjects and do the survey. I remained before her, (waiting for an answer<--not necessary because the sentence before it says "and waited for her answer" so you don't have to restate it). What appeared before my eyes -bothered me-. She spoke actively with the other students about how to find subjects and how to do their surveys.
Damn it!
Gradually, more and more gathered around her and I had waited for quietquite a long time. I know she would turn back on me. ?(Hoping she would turn back to me)? 
Maybe sheit (it, referring to the situation) was not so much ofa lack of humanism as it was a lack of professional knowledge. For the purpose of hiding her innocence, she ignored my question, did not ask for more details andor give suggestions. Who knows? But the key is that from her attitude, she is indeed indifferent with the clients who are in mental pain. It reverses our major principle. The moment she turned away, the giant image in my heart has broken into pieces.
Whatever, I know something, we cannot give awayup and should rememberkeep that in mind (or just "should remember that"). Anyway, I should turn onto other ways to help my friends. I will. 

Just so you know, your writing skills are better than A LOT of English speakers. I'm extremely impressed.  =)

Psychology and Humanitarism

Seldom have I related psychology to humanism. However, it frustrated me quite a lot this morning that I could not withstand any longer. As a student majoring in applied psychology, I find the principle of caring and helping every client the most significant. Recently, a friend of mine consulted me about her condition. For the sake of not misleading her, this morning I described what she told me to my major teacher, who was so apatheitc at the time that she left only a few words and turned to other students around her on other topics leaving me confused. Without an accurate answer, I insisted on standing in face of her and waiting for her answer. What happened then was that she kept on running her mouth with the other students about how do find subjects and do a survey. Damn it! What a teacher! She disgusted me and cared not a bit of how I felt.

Gradually more and more people gathered around her and I waited for quite a long time. I knew she would turn her back toward me.

Maybe she was not so much of lack of humanitarism as lack of professional knowledge. For the purpose of hiding her inward ugliness, she ignored my question, did not ask for any more details and refused to give me any suggestions. Who knows? But the key is that from her attitude, she could mostly likely to be indifferent to her clients who suffer from mental illnesses. What she did reverses the fundamental principle of our major as a profession. The moment she turned away, the supposing giant image of a psychologist in my heart had broken into pieces.

Whatever. Now I know there is something we shall never turn away from and always remember in mind. Anyway, I should look for other ways to help my friend. I will.