こんにちは、私はお嬢さんです.  カナダから。(Or:  私はカナダからの嬢さんです.  I prefer the first one, though...)

私は音楽がすきです。 (You could leave off the "desu" here.)

私のお気に入りの動物は蜥蜴じゃない。  (lizard is 蜥蜴 or 石竜子)
<You're trying to say "lizards *aren't* my favourite animal", right?   Another way to say this is "Tokake ga amari suki ja arimasen"  <or ja nai>.  This translated to something along the lines of "I don't much like lizards.">

そのままによる, いかなかればならないですにねます。 どうもありがとうございます.
(I don't know what "いかなかれば" is, although it seems to be an "if" verb construction...  I haven't changed anything in that sentence, because I don't understand it...)

Is this a decent translation of what you wrote?
"I'm a young lady from Canada.
I like music.
Lizards aren't my favorite animal.
<I have no idea... anything with a "~ba" verb confuses me... ^-^*  Please tell me what this is...>
Thank you very much."


Two things to watch.
1)は/わ.... は is only used as a topic marker.
To get は, you usually have to type "ha".  ^-^
2) When making an "o" long, you have a double o... usually, it is actually an "ou".  <Ex.  "doumo arigatou", not "doomo arigatoo".>
However, there are some things with an "oo", especially things with the kanji 大.


I didn't know "oki ni iri"....  Thank you for teaching me a new word...  ^-^