Last Wednesday, I had saw a movie called My Father and My Son. It touched me so much and that I had cried for a long time.

The movie was made in Turkey, and one of the actors was a little boy. He was so cute and a potential actor (Are you trying to say he has the potential to become a great actor in the future? Or are you simply saying he acted very well in this movie?).

The movie told showed the audience that the love between a man and his father and son. I like these kinds of movies , they always touched me so much and make me think deeper about love.

In a word, this is a wonderful movie.

 * The first line of paragraph three should say: The movie told showed the audience that the love between a man, his father and his son and his father and son.

At first, I thought the movie was only about a father and son but then I read the description online! 

Hope this helps!

A movie touched me

Last Wendesday I had seen a movie,called.It touched me so much,and I had cried for a long time.
The movie was made in Turkey,and one of the actors was a little boy,he was so cute and a potential actor.The movie told the audience that the love between a man and his father and his son. I like this kind of movie ,they always touched me so much and made me think deeper about love.
In a word,this is a wonderful movie.

thank you for sharing. :)