Let me introduce myself !

My name is Indrianingsih and people usually call me Indri. I was born in Malang, Indonesia 16 years ago. When I was 5, I started study in went to the * Darma Wanita Kindergarten. Then, at 7, I continued my study in on to the Mulyorejo 3 Elementary School.** of Mulyorejo 3. After graduating in In 2008, I enrolled in Malang 1 Junior High School 1 Malang. And Malang 5 Senior High School 5 Malang is the school that where I’ve choosen chose to continued my study after graduating in 2011. Now I’m in grade X 10. ***
My mother says that I’m beautiful girl. I think so too. I have black and wavy hair. My hair is short like Rihanna's. I always wear vail a veil when I do my activities out of my house. My eyes is black. I have beautiful eyelashes. My nose is pointed. I have full lips. My skin is brown like usual most Indonesians. My body is I am not tall but not too short too either. I am about 7 cm shorter than Dianti, my beloved friend.
In the future, I want study abroad. Maybe, maybe at in Al-Ahzar University or Oxford University. After graduating, I want to be a successful entrepreneur. Because, because I want to give a jobs for to the jobless. But in other side ,**** I also want to be a doctor. I want to help people to heal their diseases. Wish I hope my dreams will come true, amiieen.

* At least here in Canada, no one would ever say they were studying in kindergarten, because you just sit around and play games. So we usually say "I went to kindergarten", lol..

** In English, the title of a school is usually like [Name] [Level] School, ie Westpoint High School, St-Thersa Elementary School, etc. If you want to name a school from a particular area, say "the elementary school in such-and-such place"

*** At least in Canada, you write the grade in arabic numerals, not roman numerals. Not really a mistake though, just a note about common useage.

**** I get the idea, but "in other side" is just not an expression in English :)

Good composition, very few serious errors! One thing I would recommend is to try and write longer sentences. You write a lot of very short ones. It's not exactly wrong, but it's better writing to combine several ideas into longer sentences using commas, etc.