First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hello everyone! Please call me Abby.(Always insert a space after a full stop, comma, exclamation mark or question mark, or actually any punctuation mark!) I come from shanghai in China. I am a lovely girl and (Always use a capital "I" when speaking about yourself) I've been in real estate for 4 years.

I love my job: now I must speak English (Always use a captial letter for a country; England; Scotland; Wales; Ireland; America; China etc) with my clients (You will have more than one client, so it should be plural, "clients". Some words like, "sheep" are singular and plural, just to confuse students! You have one sheep and 50 sheep (not 50 sheeps), but in this case it's plural so put an "s" on the end of it.). As a result of work reason.

So I've come here to get some help. We can become friends!

So, it will read:

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hello everyone! Please call me Abby. I come from shanghai in China.

I am a lovely girl and I've been in real estate for 4 years.

I love my job: now I must speak English with my clients. 

So I've come here to get some help. We can become friends!

Welcome :) 

zhù nǐ háoyùn