What made you smile today

I smiled because it is a sunny day today.

It kept raining for the whole month, I had a lot of clothes which need to wash. I almost  did nothing when it was rainning. I was worried about rainy day , I'm ready to own a good weather.

The sun came out today, My happiness is coming back. and smile , smile, smile.

tell me something that make you smile today.

 
今儿让我发自内心微笑的一件事情是我在拥挤的公交车上看到一个小伙子帮一个老太太捡她掉在地上的东西。有时候简单很微不足道的小事总能时不时的让我觉得很温暖。

correction/addition  /  (suggestion)  /  ______ (another way of saying)  /  ______ (a better way of saying)  /  a mistake  /  something unfitting/unnecessary/reduntant  /  my own comments

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What made you smile today?

I smile (am smiling) because it is a fine day today.

It has kept raining (has been raining) all a month (since the start of March) [1], so [2] I have had a lot of clothes which that I  have needed to washing (I've had to wash more clothes than usual). I did nothing when (while) it was rainning. I was (just) worrying about the rained day, I and get ready to own a waiting for (some) good weather to come along.

The sun came out today, and my happiness is coming back (I felt my happiness come back). and smile , smile, smile. I couldn't stop smiling/ I haven't been able to stop smiling.

(Can you) tell me something that make has made you smile today?

[1] 如果这个月已经过去了，你可以说 It kept raining all month. 

[2] 逗号连接的两个句子之间需要连接词连接！and, so, as, 等

I rewrote your work so that it includes some of my suggestions and corrections:

What made you smile today?

I am smiling because it is a fine day today.

It has been raining since the start of March, and I have had to do more washing than usual (because my clothes are soaking wet when (by the time) I come home). I (generally) don’t do very much when it’s raining. The rain makes me feel gloomy[3], and (while it's raining) I just stay indoors waiting for the sun to come out. (I just stay inside, wondering when the rain will stop and waiting for the sun to come out again).

The sun (finally) came out today, and I felt my happiness come back (and I started to feel happy (again)). I haven't been able to stop smiling all day.

Has anything made you smile today? Yes! I finished learning a song on the piano that I've been working on for AGES.

[3] you can replace 'gloomy' with 'worried', if it really makes you feel worried.

我喜欢夜晚下雨，可是讨厌早上下雨。夜晚下雨的时候，听着外面如同催眠曲般的沙沙雨声，安静无比的，大家都睡得很香吧。

What makes you smile today

I smile because it is a fine day today.

It kept raining all month, I had a lot of clothes which I needed to wash. I did nothing when it was rainning. I was worrying about it raining day , I get ready for good weather.

The sun came out today, My happiness is coming back. and smile , smile, smile.

tell me something that make you smile today.