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Should girls chase after boys?
If a girl falls in love with a boy, should the girl tell the boy that she loves him? In my country, girls will seldom make an advance towards boys because they are afraid that the boys would refuse them. They end up carrying a torch for these boys and they wait for the boys to say "I love you".
On the other hand, some people think that boys won't cherish girls who run after chase them. Frankly speaking, if I fall in love with an excellent boy I will take some measures to show I have a crush on him. Whether he accepts me or not, at least I will know what he thinks about me. Some girls are afraid that they will be hurted. However, times have changed and girls have their rights to pursue happiness. However, how to take the first step? After all, it's easier said than done.
Good work! The main issue was the punctuation: you need a space to follow each mark when you write in English, otherwise your text becomes difficult to read.
The phrase is to have a crush on someone. If you "crush (on) someone", it means you are physically hurting them. Speaking of, the past form of hurt is hurt.
Good use of idioms.
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