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Angry birds . The title sounds a little bit cheeky. Well, actually I'm not really into this 'angry birds' stuff but they're kinda cute. Angry suits the birds because they just happened to be cute. Somehow when it comes to mankind, being angry is quiet a disaster and apparently you could end up being a jerk instead of being cute like the 'angry birds'. It's a fact that you can't separate these two which are people and emotions. I meant it's a nature human being because we're surrounded by numerous feelings like love, hatred, happy, sad and anger. Certainly, it's the heart that holds sort of emotions in you. Anger usually comes with hatred. Here, my point is actually about anger. It is the most important for you to manage your emotions well especially in overcoming anger because anger will filled the heart with hatred. Indeed, this hatred will put a stain in your heart. The effect of the stain in your heart is really bad which it will slowly ruin all the good qualities in you and drive you to involve in bad things. Hence, people will hate you. Therefore, gettting rid of your anger is compulsory to lead you become a good hearted person. From a good heart then, you can be as cute as those 'angry birds' and surely people would love you. <---------really bad writing, feel free to comment and correct it :)

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Angry birds .

The title sounds a little bit cheeky. Well, actually I'm not really into this 'angry birds' stuff but they're kinda cute. Angry suits the birds because they just happened to be cute. Somehow when it comes to mankind, being angry is quite quiet a disaster and apparently you can end up being a jerk instead of being cute like the 'angry birds'.

It's a fact that you can't separate these two which are people and emotions. I mean  it is natural for human beings because we're surrounded by numerous feelings like love, hatred, happiness, sadness and anger. Certainly, it's the heart that holds all sorts of emotions in you. Anger usually comes with hatred.

Here, my point is actually about anger. It is the most important for you to manage your emotions well, especially in overcoming anger, because anger will filled the heart with hatred. Indeed, this hatred will put a stain in your heart. The effect of the stain in your heart is really bad because which it will slowly ruin all the good qualities in you and drive you to get involved in bad things. Hence, people will hate you. Therefore, gettting rid of your anger is compulsory to lead you to become a good hearted person. From a good heart then, you can be as cute as those 'angry birds' and surely people will love you. <---------really bad writing, feel free to comment and correct it :)

It is not your normal high quality writing. Oh well, we all have off days. 

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