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Louise's notebook entry: Aug 03, 2010 Pressure is something that we dislike very much but cannot get rid of. There is no doubt that people at different ages are all confronted with a variety of pressures in our society. For instance, students get pressures from exams. Graduates get pressures from job seeking. And adults get them from making a living. However, pressure is not unbeatable. I will share some efficient ways for easing it through this article. First, listen to music. The genres of music do not need to be soothing music only, although it works a lot indeed according to some researches of scientists. In other words, all kinds of music will be beneficial as long as you are fascinated by them. Likewise, it will be a good choice to listen to heavy metal songs by your favorite singers. When you are surrounded by music, those stresses and unhappy things will totally go away. Second, share with your friends. When you get a great news about yourself, you will call your best friend at once. But have you ever thought about share those terrible things and sorrowful news with them too? If not, then please have a try. Don’t think that it would bother them, because true friends would never stand by when you are upset. Just tell them what you are faced with; friends are always there for you. Finally, how about cry as loud as you can? Cry is not always a bad thing as smile is not always a good thing. So when you hold pressures, try to find a place where no one else is there or just lock yourself in your own room, then prepare a pack of tissues, and cry. You will feel better after that. Overall, the three methods above are what I think of the most useful ones to ease pressure.

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Louise's notebook entry: Aug 03, 2010

Pressure is something that we dislike very much but cannot get rid of. There is no doubt that people at  of different ages are all confronted with a variety of pressures in our society. For instance, students get feel pressures from exams. Graduates are under pressure when seeking get pressures from  jobs seeking. Adults get them feel pressure from  to makeing a living. However, pressure is not unbeatable insurmountable. I will share some efficient  effective ways for easing it through in this article.

[Try these out... "Many people in society feel pressure.  Students are under pressure during their exams, gradutes come under pressure when they are looking for jobs, and adults are put under pressure to make a living."   In a list of 3 or more things, it goes A, B, and C. ]

First, listen to music. The genres of music do not  don't need to be soothing music only, although it works a lot well indeed,  according to some scientific researches of scientists. In other words, all any kinds of music will be beneficial as long as you are fascinated by enjoy it them. Likewise Accordingly, it will would be a good choice to listen to heavy metal songs by your favorite singers. When you are surrounded by music, those  your stresses and unhappy things  unhappiness will totally go away.

[Likewise means, "Me too." I think you're trying to say, "According to the same logic," or "It follows that..."]
[The unhappy things won't actually dissapear, but the emotion of unhappiness, hopefully, will.]

Second, share with your friends. When you get a great news about yourself, you will call your best friend at once,  But have you ever thought about share  sharing those  that terrible things and sorrowful news with them, too? If not, then please have a try it. Don’t think that it would bother them, because true friends would never stand by when you are upset. Just tell them what you are faced with; friends are always there for you.

[This is tricky. "True friends always stand by me in times of trouble. They never desert me. Those same friends never stand by and watch me suffer. They involve themselves and help me."

Two meanings...one means to be active in a loyal way, the other to be passive in an unhelpful way; ie. "Are you just going to stand by and watch them take our seat?"]

Finally, how about cry crying as loud as you can? To cry is not always bad, just as to smile is not always a good thing. So when you hold are under pressures, try to find a place where no one else is there or just lock yourself in your own room, then prepare a pack of tissues, and cry. You will feel better after that.

Overall, the three methods above are what I think are of the most useful ones to ease pressure.
ease the pressure, relieve the pressure, take the pressure off

[Unless you are suggesting that your reader actually do these things in sequence, the sequence words are not necessary]. Good work, keep going!

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