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Books and me(2) Several years ago, I encountered the difficulties of life. I was depressed and frustrated. Maybe I was too young to deal with the hardships at that time, so I chose a negtive way to face the life. Paints and worries haunted my heart.Eevry morning,the first thing I did was to encourage myself to be optimistic, but all was done in vain. I really didn't know how to deal with the life,only to indulge myself in the suffering. Until one day,I surprisingly found that I was relieved by reading a book. When I was reading, I could forget all the worries and paints. The most important thing was that I could get courage to face the hardships. And I felt that there was hope in life.

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Books and me(2)

Several years ago, I encountered the difficulties of life. I was depressed and frustrated. Maybe I was too young to deal with the hardships at that time, so I chose a negtive way to face the life. Paints and worries haunted my heart.  Eevry morning,the first thing I did was to encourage myself to be optimistic, but all was done in vain.  I really didn't know how to deal with the life, only how to indulge myself in the suffering.
Until one day, to my surprise, I surprisingly found that I was relieved by reading a book.
When I was reading, I could forgot all the worries and paints. The most important thing was that I could get found courage to face the hardships, and I felt that there was hope in life.

The fragment "I was relieved by reading a book" sounds rather odd.  Perhaps it should say , "I found relief from my suffering through reading a book", or maybe you could use "release" instead of "relief".
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Books and me(2)

Several years ago, I encountered the difficulties of life. I was depressed and frustrated. Maybe I was too young to deal with the hardships at that time, so I chose a negtive way to face the life. Paints and worries haunted my heart. Every morning,the first thing I did was to encourage myself to be optimistic, but all was done in vain. I really didn't know how to deal with the life,only to indulge myself in the suffering.
Until one day,I surprisingly found that I was relieved by reading a book.
When I was reading, I could forget all the worries and paints. The most important thing was that I could get courage to face the hardships. And I felt that there was hope in life.

I love books too ^^

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