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#1 Who am I ?
Hi :3 I'm a girl from a small Russian town called Lipetsk.
Right now I'm a student of the faculty of landscape design. (surprisingly, I hate flowers!)
I like good music. Especially jazz, blues, and rock (hard-rock ^^). But I can tell I'm a meloman (?? - что значит это слово?).
I adore ('adore' слышком крайний - лучше "love") to read fantasy and drama books. I could read twenty-four hours a day if I wanted to.
Also I love Japanese anime. Sometimes I draw.
Well... I'm going to China but I don't know any Chinese. It scares me. But it's unreal how difficult it is to find a teacher in my town.
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Немного просветлении:
"Right now" is better than "now" as just to say 'now' suggests that you are no longer a girl from a small Russian town.
In lists, the last item must have an 'and' before it except in very informal or dramatic speech.
"I" when it means "я" is always capitalised, as are the names of countries and nationalities: the capital of Japan, the Japanese people.
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