First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hi, everybody! My name is Sergey, I am 33 years old. I have been learning English for 2 years without a teacher, using books, computer. My propose is TOEFL. I am learning English for my career.

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hi, everybody! My name is Sergey, I am 33 years old. I have been learning English for 2 years without a teacher, using books and a computer. My propose is TOEFL. I learn English for my career.

First notebook entry: Introducing myself;

Hi everybody! My name is Sergey and I'm thirty-three years old. I have been learning English for 2 years without the aid of a teacher. I have been using books and a computer. I have 2 purposes for learning; 1. to pass the TOEFL. 2. to help me in my career. 

Notes: I linked your name and age with the linking word 'and' in order to make a litlle bit more complex sentence. At your level I believe that you should be trying to make longer sentences. Thirty-three is written this way with a hyphen for the years, the short answer is that it shows the decade and then how far into that decade you are. I encourage you to research this rule. I don't have enough room to explain the styles here for this, sorry. You need "a" before computer because you're speaking of "one" computer. The articles 'a' 'an,' etc., can be a little tricky. Keep working on those in order to write and speak in a fluent manner.

I'm guessing about the TOEFL part but I think this is what you mean. At any rate, I wanted to show you a way to write it. I hope it makes sense to you and helps you.

About how to express the numbers 10 and below. As a general rule you should always show them as numbers (1,2,3,.....10) if they are 1 THROUGH 10. Higher numbers are written ( eleven, twelve...).

It's clear to me that you've worked hard in just 2 short years! Now is the time to speak with NATIVE speakers and rise to another level.

Good luck with your studies. -Jerry

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hi, everybody! My name is Sergey, I am 33 years old. I have been learning English for 2 years without a teacher, using books, computer. My propose is TOEFL. I'm learning English for my career. 

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hi, everybody! My name is Sergey, I am 33 years old. I have been learning English for 2 years without a teacher, using books and a computer. My propose is TOEFL. I learn English for my career.