First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hi,I'm a Chinese girl and 22 years old.I'm not good at English,but I realised that it's a useful language,and I hope I can use it as well as my tongue language one day.If you glad to help me to study English,I'll be so lucky and thank you very much.

Hi, I am, a 22 year old Chinese woman (girl).  I do not speak (write) English well, but I realised it is a useful language to Learn.  I hope I can speak English as well as I speak my native language one day.  I will be lucky (honoured) if you are able to help me study English.  Thank you very much.

Your english is very good! You will master it very fast!

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hi,I'm a Chinese girl and 22 years old.I'm not good at English,but I realise that it's a useful language,and I hope I can use it as well as my mother-tongue language one day.If you are glad to help me to study English,I'll be so lucky and thank you very much.

only some errors on grammar.