First notebook entry: Introducing myself
Hello.
I am a Japanese, 24 years old. I work at Kindergarten and I love my work.
I am very happy to know this web site. So I would like to improve my English. Could you fix my entry and add me your friend if possible?
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Well, you teach at Kindergarten. Frankly, that's my level in Japanese now. *^_^*. I love listening to the Children songs... sometimes even sing a little ^^. In short, I am still a kid in the study of Japanese language.!!.........So, if you want, you can add me to your list either as a friend or as another student for your kindergarten......anyone is OK for me.^_^... lol... Thank you.^^
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First notebook entry: Introducing myself
Hello,I am a Japanese, 24 years old. I work at Kindergarten and I love my work.
I am very happy to know this website. So I would like to improve my English. Could you fix my entry and add me as your friend, if possible?
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- 'website' is one single word
- 'fix my entry' is ok but sounds little too colloquial. Better if you can use another expression, something like "correct the mistakes in my entry" etc. Just a suggestion...^^
** your English level and the flow of expressions are really nice. I presume, your spoken (oral) English is fluent too. Keep it up!! ^^
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Kindergarten teacher.. great job
you can add me my skype and we can chat...
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