Hello,everyone! My name is Kelly. At First, I’m glad to be here to introduce myself.

Hi, Kelly!

"At first" means something like "before" or "earlier." For example, "At first he said he loved me, but then he changed his mind."

"First" means "that which is first in a series or done first."

I come from Huzhou, Zhejiang province, in China, and I study in Yiwu in the same province.

During In my spare time, I’d I like to go shopping with my friends and see watch films at home.

We generally say "DURING my lunch(time)," "DURING my (work) break," "DURING the summer," but "IN my spare time."

"I would like to go shopping" expresses a preference. "I like to go shopping" expresses a habitual activity.

"see" (what your eyes detect), "watch" (what your eyes look at for a longer period of time)

I prefer to watch films at home, too. I borrow movies for free from my public library.

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hello, everyone! My name is Kelly. At first, I’m glad to be here to introduce myself. I come from Huzhou, Zhejiang Province and study in Yiwu. In /During my spare time, I’d like to go shopping with my friends and watch films at home.

I saw very few mistakes on your submission but I just wanted to make a little bit of corrections which sound more natural to me. Overall very good job!

Oh one more thing, please always remember to place a space before you start a sentence.

水平有限，只能帮你指出这一个错误，哈哈

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hello,everyone everybody! My name is Kelly.At first,I’m glad to be here to introduce myself.I come from Huzhou,Zhejiang province and I study in Yiwu.During my spare time,I’d like to go shopping with my friends and see films at home.