Hello

Hi~everybody
I'm from Taiwan,and i'm a student now! ( i am a student > u already use present tense )
My interest  (hobbies are )  listen to the music (s) ,and make friends (friendship) !

maybe still a lot mistakes in my correction ...i still learning too ...thank you! :)

Hello

Hi~everybody
I'm from Taiwan and I'm a student now!
My interest hobbies is are listening to the music and making friends!

You did a good job!

You have more than one hobby, so you say "are", not "is". 

Example) "My hobbies are listening to music and making friends!"

Hello

Hieverybody.
I'm from Taiwanand I'm a student now!
My interests are listening to the musicand making friends!

Put the punctuation right after the word, then leave a space. We usually don't put a comma right before a conjunction (and, or, etc.).

You have more than one interest so you must use the plural forms.

The word I is a proper noun so it must be capitalized.

Hello

Hi~everybody
I come from Taiwan,and i'm a student.
My hobbies are listen to the musics,and make friendship !