Dream

Everyone in this world has their owns dream. Maybe sometimes our dreams are ridiculous or crazy but that's not important. What really is important is ourselves. I also have my own dream. I know to achieve what we want in our life requires too many sacrifices. I know it is very hard but that is what makes our life so fun and enjoyable. So, what I try to say is never give up and enjoy our life as much as possible.

I would enjoy life more if you way fewer errors: 'have and has'? You learned that in grade four.