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I consider the 1st category in sport as important accomplishment, because even though I haven't chosen professional sport career, I put lots of efforts while training to improve my results. Finally i did it and it means much to me, because as a teen I already showed myself that I can work hard and accomplish my goals.
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I consider being first at Sports a great accomplishment, because I worked my way up from nothing and I had to put a lot of efforts to improve my skills, I'm not planing to make a career out of it, but i was so glad to know that all my hard work paid off. Winning the first place meant so much for me.
Now i believe more then ever, that with both hard work and perseverance i can definitely reach my goals.
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yes it is corect dear.gud job
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