somthing I good at
Singing is mine's strong suit .
At the beggianing,I learned sing by myself ,when I got older my parents supported me went to BJ music academy to studyed singing.
I have chosed singsing to be my major since I was 13 years old.
So I had to practise singing skills everyday.
When I was young I felt singing was very interesting.You know,it liked a gift,I can sing very well.
I used to sing to my parents because I had sibilings and my parents had to work hard to raised us up,they were so tired that I'd like to sing to made them happy.
In the past, I thought singing was the most happiness and easist thing in the world.
But now,I think it is really difficult because I want to be a proffessional singer.
You know,my teacher alaways tell me ,there are very deep emotion and a lot kinds of colors in our voice and demand me try to use them to sing.
He said, he need hear colorful and emotional in my voice.
But,how to use my throat to make my voice colorful ?
The voice can be seen or taught?Of course not!
So it is too hard to understand and control.
I always feel confused about singing . Because a proffession singer have to learn so many skills and use their wholelife to think and fell about them.
On the other hand ,I need learn more knowlages of music to support my thinking.
So,I fell little bit tired now ,but I still love music love singing so I'm not going to give up forever.
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It has been all good for a person to find out his or her passion for something at the early age. Many people spend their whole life doing something they have no interest in at all and die as diappointed old guys still without knowing what they really like or could possibly good at.
You are very lucky if it is true that you are really gifted with singing and want to take it as life career to pursui. From my own experience , usully good-looking girls can’t sing, the prettier they are, the worse their singing.(hehe…) But I would rather believe that you are blessed with both. Is your picture P.Sed?
Take Teresa Deng (邓丽君)for instance, who is one of my favourite singers and is thought to be incredibly gifted with singing. But you ever listened to her singing of her early life, you would be surprised by the difference between her then naive and a bit showy way of singing in early age and her later well-developed, subtly-handled and magnificient vocal performance. I think one way to say that is that great singers are certainly gifted, but they are not born great. They grow great through hard-working and real dedication. I hope , and you’d better pray for it, that you passion will push you forward on the long journey through all obstacles.
Enough with my rambling, Good luck!
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I tried to keep the original sentences as much as possible, even thought i believe some needed to be fully changed.
And for that "So" in the beginning, it was supposed to be next to : 13 years old, right after a comma. ( sorry ! my bad )
There are some small taping mistakes as well, i'm sorry about that too !
And thank you Mr Brett about the : Singing is my strong suit . I've never heard that, actually we don't study english, i'm just trying to learn it on my own ^^ .
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'Singing is my strong suit' is correct.
You shouldn't start a sentence with 'so.'
I chose singing as my major whenI was 13 years old, so I had to practise singing skills everyday.
I'm not going to give up, ever.
I am a musician; it is not an easy life. You must practise every day to keep your technique fresh. A famous musician once told me, 'don't neglect other parts of your life.' He was right, if you are healthy and happy, it makes your music better.
Good luck.
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Something I'm good at
Singing is my best skill.
At first, I learned how to sing by myself, when I got older my parents supported me, and send me to BJ music academy to study singing.
I have wanted to get a music major since I was 13 years old.
So I had to train everyday, i order to improve my vocal skills
When I was young I found singing very interesting. I could sing very well, i think i was naturally gifted.
I love singing for my parents and make them feel good and happy, that's how I would thank them for their enormous efforts, to raise my brothers and I.
In the past, I was thinking about singing as great source of happiness, and an easy way to express joy and the pleasantest thing in the world, but now that i want to become a professional singer I find it a bit harder than I've expected.
You know, my teacher always tells me that all our voices are very colorful, cheerful and full of emotions. And that's what he wanted me come up with.
But, I don't seem to understand how to make a colorful voice come out of my throat ? Voices can't be seen. And this is not helping me at all, to improve nor control my voice.
I started finding singing very confusing, and i wonder how professional singers feel their music.
And I think I'll better get all kind of informations about music, so I can be able to fully understand it, But right now I'm tired, still I'm going to give up on it, because music is what I love the most.
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