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Today, I saw a film. That is,"The King's Speech.". We wanted to see it at 9:40. But my father's friend had a problem and let us helped him. So we couldn't see it. Then, we planned to see the film at 12:10. But my father still had a problem. Finally, we saw it at 3:30. It was a fantastic movie. I love it a lot
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My Day
Today, I saw a film.(This sentence is right, but usually we say "movie" instead of "film") That is,"The King's Speech.". We wanted to see it at 9:40, but my father's friend had a problem and let us helped him we had to (or, wanted to) help him, so we couldn't see it. Then, we planned to see the film at 12:10, but my father still had a problem. Finally, we saw it at 3:30. It was a fantastic movie. I love it a lot!
Very good!!! Your English is great. Using the word "film" sounds a bit formal to me. Usually in everyday speech most people will use "movie".
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You are very welcome:)
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Thanks, Seda and "Cicek". Have a nice day!
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I saw it and liked it .
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You enjoyed it , thanks God . I hope your father is fine and without any special problem now. Amen
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