美女，我认为从这篇文章看，你不像native。

Thanks to god allow me do what that I want.

native不可能写出这样的病句。上面已经有人纠正了，我就不重复了

That's my life, and I will enjoy it.这个才是native的语感，差了一个and，就从错误的时态变成了正确的时态。很神奇。

That's My Lfve

When I want to cry, I cry. When I feel happy, I smile. That's my life, I will enjoy it. Thanks to god allow me do what that I want.

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This is my life

When I want to cry, I cry. When I feel happy, I smile. That's my life, and I will enjoy it. Thanks to God for allowing me to do what that I want.