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Excited about the English Festival Our school will hold the 2012 English Festival soon,which is held once a year.This year,each class of our grade needs to perform a play in front of the whole grade. My class has chosen the "Midsummer Night's Dream" to play.This is a famous work by Shakespeare.I will play the role of Titania,which a great character,i think. And i am going to host the show,too(1 of the 6 ).There is a lot of work to do,because the teachers trust us and asked us 6 students to deal with some details of this show.We need to get security,need to make a list of plays,and so on. All in all,i am really excited about it.I hope everyone will it. :D

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Excited about the English Festival

Our school will hold the 2012 English Festival soon, which is held once a year. This year, each class of our grade needs to perform a play in front of the whole grade.
My class has chosen the "Midsummer Night's Dream" to play. This is a famous work by Shakespeare. I will play the role of Titania, which a great character, I think.
And I am going to host the show, too (one of the six). There is a lot of work to do because the teachers trust us and asked us six students to deal with some details of this show. We need to get security, need to make a list of playsand so on.
All in all, I am really excited about it. I hope everyone will like it. :D

The word I is a proper nouns and must be capitalized. Put a space after the punctuation.

The phrase "We need to" modifies both "get security" and "make a list of plays," so it doesn't need repeating.

When writing, we spell out the numbers.

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