The A Team

Thanks for making a correction of the my last article.
I still don't know how to use this website...

I'm gonna write about recent event.

I saw Ed Sheeran last week!
He came to Japan for his album promotion.
I attended to his free live concert in CD store. I was in the front row! Amazing.
His live show was sooo awesome. I was very satisfied.
After the live show, he signed my CD book let. He looked very relaxed calm boy.
I love his music so much!:)

Last Saturday, I had a day off my part time job my part-time job was had a day off. 

So I went to the exhibition of Motohiko Odani with my father.
His works were beautiful n mysterious (you used the slang correctly here, but i'm not sure if it's appropriate for the point you were trying to make. That's just a small nuance though). I'm interested in the sculpture because of him.

English propositions n articles are my weak point:( Difficult!

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Your english is excellent! just a few small problems.
I'm not sure what you meant when you said "calm boy", so i changed that to "very relaxed". That seemed like what you were trying to say. Other than that though, it was almost perfect!

When you said "beautiful n mysterious", you used the slang correctly. But when i use "n" rather than "and", it's usually just when i'm not really talking something seriously. When your talking about a song you really like, or something your serious about, you may just want to stick with "and".

The best advice i can give you is this. Watch lots of english tv shows!