First notebook entry: Introducing myself Chinese girl who are going to searching a sincere heart with foreign people. Like sunshine boy who love life !

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I am a Chinese girl who is searching for a sincere heart among foreign people. I like a boy who has a sunny personality and loves life !

Your introduction does not say why you want to learn English.It just seems to focus on finding a guy. Italki is a language learning site

Your English is not bad. The word placement needs work, but you have the correct idea. Very good job!

Welcome to italki. Enjoy your stay in this community! I'm sure you will be able to learn and improve your language level here. Feel free to add me on Skype or QQ. - Teacher Anthony

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