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Just a image? Who or what have I become? I am not a monster nor a human being any more, it seems to me. I am neither kind nor cruel, neither happy nor sad. I know every aspect of my being so well, and yet I do not know who I am or what I can become. Moving in a direction that doesn't exist into a place that is only known to a few. What is to become of me?

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Just a image?

Who or what have I become? I am not a monster nor a human being any more, it seems to me. I am neither kind nor cruel, neither happy nor sad. I know every aspect of my being so well, and yet I do not know who I am or what I can become. Moving in a direction that doesn't exist into a place that is only known to a few. What is to become of me?

 

Just an image. The word 'image' starts with the vowel 'i'. The word preceding it cannot end in a vowel. 

I think the fact you are questioning who you are, and where you are going, is a wonderful indication that you will go far and do well.  It is those who don't question that stay in the same place, going nowhere.

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Just an Image?

Who or what have I become? I am not a monster nor a human being any more, it seems to me. I am neither kind nor cruel, neither happy nor sad. I know every aspect of my being so well, and yet I do not know who I am or what I can become. Moving in a direction that doesn't exist into a place that is only known to a few. What is to become of me?

You write well but capitalize the title. 

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