Pupils in China

With the changing of the times, the educational institutions also implement the new stratagy of development. Schools pay more attention to the aspect of humanitarianism. But However,  the burden of pupils is more and more heavy.

In China, pupils have to do lots of homework. For example, a pupil left school at 17o`clock. Then, he arrived home at 05:30pm. If he was a diligent pupil,he wouldn`t have dinner until he finished his homework. When he was going to have dinner, the time was about 9:00pm or even later.

My cousin who is a primary student, Grade 2. She has the same experience now as I ever had. In the early days of winter vacation, I lived in my aunt`s home and I witnessed the "war" between my aunt and my cousin. The "powderhose" of the "war" is homework.

My cousin is an obedient pupil. She listens to her teachers at school and finishes the homework on time. But So, why can the "war" happen? Because my aunt wants her to do more practice besides the homework assigned by teachers. My cousin isn`t willing to do that. It`s already 9:00am when she has finished her homework.We all know a pupil needs to have a enough time to sleep or they will be too sleepy to listen to courses next day.

But the current situation in China is that pupils who don`t attend extra classes or do extra practice will lag behind others. The higher grade they are, the far more distance
they have to go. So in order to keep their children be the best among others, parents oblige their children to do much. In fact, children have no choice. They aren`t don't have freedom.

Competition in society is more and more strong. Though our society has advocated the humanitarianism for a long time, the situation isn`t optimistic. I hope it will change someday. We should respect everyone,even if he is a mere child.

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