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Two girls` Valentine`s Day It`s a special day today.Many lovers had a stroll along the steet.Girls who received flowers as presents wore a smile all the time. About me,I`m single.! So,I have to spend the special day with my best friend---another single girl. But the reason why we are still single isn`t because we aren`t pretty. We both think that making a boyfriend isn`t a random thing. We need to have a thoughtful choice. In the afternoon, we went to KTV to sing. During the time,my friend received a rose. It happened to her unexpectedly.. It also scared me.I thought that maybe someone who love my friend followed us to the KTV.Finally,I decided to help my friend clear it up.So I pushed the door and then looked up and down the person who sent the rose to my friend.Next ,the strange thing happened again! Can you guess what happened?I received a rose,too! Do you know why?HaHa.It`s a activity held by the KTV. Employees of the KTV had a unique work which was different from other days.That is they sent roses to single girls singing in their KTV. In any case,though I`m single,I still received a rose luckily. And you?

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Two girls` Valentine`s Day

It`s a special day today. Many lovers had a stroll along the steet. Girls who received flowers as presents wore a smile all the time. About me: I`m single, so I have to spend the special day with my best friend---another single girl. But the reason why we are still single isn`t because we aren`t pretty. We both think that making getting a boyfriend isn`t a random thing. We need to have make a thoughtful choice.

In the afternoon, we went to KTV to sing. During that time,my friend received a rose. It happened to her unexpectedly. It also scared me. I thought that maybe someone who love my friend followed us to the KTV. Finally, I decided to help my friend clear it up. So I pushed the door and then looked up and down the person who sent the rose to my friend. Next ,the strange thing happened again! Can you guess what happened? I received a rose, too!

Do you know why? HaHa. It`s a activity held by the KTV. Employees of the KTV had a unique work schedule which was different from other days. That is why they sent roses to single girls singing in their KTV.

In any case, though I`m single, I still received a rose luckily. And you?

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