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new year new plans In new year, everyone has there own aims, I also have my aims. 1.lose weight I know slim is beautiful in China, so I must be lose weight! In winter holiday,my parents consider I am very fat,in school, my room-mate also thought I am fat! I am very sad .So I determine to lose weight. I plan to exercise everyday,and eat less than ever,I think I can secceed! 2.study english hard. my major subject is english, but my spoken english is weak and my grammar is poor too.So I must be study hard,recite words,read english newspaper,watch english movies and so on. 3.not stay up In this semester,we have many courses,I almost get mad!so I don't want stay up, I'm afraid I can't get up in time! Fighting!

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So if you accomplish your goals, you will be a slim, English speaking sleeper. Add another goal, I think you can :)
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I'm just a little curious where y'all Chinese girls learnt that last slogan, "fighting", it seems incredibly popular among you girls. It really kills me. Where, a Baidu url or something?
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... so I must lose weight!

In the winter holiday,my parents considered I was very fat, in school, my room-mate also thought I was fat! ...So I am determined to lose weight.

I plan to exercise every day,and .... I can succeed!
2.study English hard.
'my grammar is poor too.'    is alright.

So I must study hard,recite words,read english newspapers.

 

That is a great picture!

Don't get ill trying to get thin. Good luck.

 

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My New Years plan ( or you can say Resolution instead of plan)

In new year, everyone has there own aims, I also have my aims.
1.lose weight:
I know being slim is beautiful in China, so I must be lose weight! In the  During the winter holidays,my parents consider I am very   me fat. At school my room-mate also thaough that I was fat! I am very sad ( you can use in it's place. This upset me.) .So I am determine to lose weight. I plan to exercise everyday,and eat less than ever.I think I can secceed!

2.Study English hard.
My major is English, but my spoken English is weak and my grammar is also poor too.So I must be study hard,recite words,read english newspaper,watch english movies and so on.

 
3.Not stay up                                                                                                                      This semester,I  We have many courses, it almost gets mad! So I don't want to  stay up, I'm afraid I can't that I won't ( or will not) get up in time!
Fighting!

 

That was pretty good. Wish you the best with your plan. FIGHTING!!!!!!!

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