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First notebook entry: Introducing myself i am an ordinary chinese girl who loves life. i have the urge to experience all the wonderful things in the world,especially something new, something fashionable.i like making friends with other people and experience the kind of life that i have not experienced. with the aim to challenge myself and the appetite for english, i really want to learn more, and be a commander of english,which is not only a pretty cool thing for me, but also a fantastic way to improve myself. stepping on and on together with lots of friends feels so good. i really love that.

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I am an ordinary Chinese girl who loves life. I have the urge to experience all the wonderful things in the world, especially something new and fashionable. I like making friends with other people and experiencing the kind of life that I have not experienced.
With the aim to challenge myself and an appetite for English, I really want to learn more, and gain a command of English, which is not only a pretty cool thing for me, but also a fantastic way to improve myself. Stepping on and on together with lots of friends feels so good. I really love that.

The rules of capitalization are rules, not suggestions. Other than that, this essay is pretty good!

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