Wonderful Roommates

I had been living with these three lovable girls for five years. They were Alyaa, Adibah and Alia. They were my roommates when I stayed am staying at the hostel during the secondary school. Despite being my roommates, they were also my best friends who would share anything together. Since, it had been five year we were altogether, we were closed like siblings. We did a lot of thing together.Therefore, I had tons of unforgettable memories with them.

The first person who became my roommate was Alyaa. She was also my classmate. She loves manga and anime. She was a bright and cheerful person. But sometimes, she didn’t really care about other since she was too obsessed with her manga and anime. She was also a cute girl. She had too many boys too handle. She was very lucky to have many boys who cared about her.

Then, Alia came to be my roommate. We were friend since we were nine years old. She was the tallest among us. She was quite chubby but cute. She was really friendly and funny. She was also a good leader and she was the vice president in our school. The things that I liked the most about her was although she had lots of money, she never showed off. She treated all her friends kindly.

Adibah was is the last person towho become our roommate. She was a caring person. I could rely on her whenever I wanted someone to listen to all my worries. She was the one who took care of me when I was sick. For me, she was the best roommate ever. She was a little bit clumsy and always made us laugh by her silly mistakes. We called her Dibek for no reason. But I think the nickname suited her since she acted boyish even though we all knew that she had a soft and sensitive heart.

Now we have been separated to different colleges except for me and Alyaa. We are now studying in the same college and taking the same course. However, we are not roommates anymore. While, Alia and Dibek, they are now studying in Shah Alam. I hope that all of us will success in our life and be friends forever.

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Wonderful Roommates

I hadbeen living lived with these three lovable girls for five years. They were Alyaa, Adibah, and Alia. They were my roommates when while I am was staying at the hostel during the secondary school. Despite being my roommates, they were also my best friends, who would share anything together. Since, it had been we were roommates for five years we were altogether, we were closed as close as like siblings. We did a lot of things together. Therefore, I had share tons of unforgettable memories with them.
The first person who became my roommate was Alyaa. She was also my classmate. She loves loved manga and anime. She was a bright and cheerful person. But sometimes, she didn’t really care about others, since she was too obsessed with her manga and anime. She was also a cute girl. She had too many boys too to handle. She was very lucky to have many boys who cared about her.
Then, Alia came to be my roommate. We were had been friends since we were nine years old. She was the tallest among us. She was quite chubby, but cute. She was really friendly and funny. She was also a good leader and she was the vice president in of our school class. The things thing that I liked the most about her was, although she had lots of money, she never showed off. She treated all her friends kindly.
Adibah is was the last person who became our roommate. She was a caring person. I could rely on her whenever I wanted someone to listen to all my worries. She was the one who took care of me when I was sick. For me, she was the best roommate ever. She was a little bit clumsy and always made us laugh by with her silly mistakes. We called her Dibek for no reason. But I think the nickname suited her, since she acted boyish, even though we all knew that she had a soft and sensitive heart.
Now we have been separated, attending to different colleges, except for me and Alyaa and me. We The two of us are now studying in the same college and taking the same courses. However, we are not roommates anymore. WhileAt the same time, Alia and Dibek, they are now studying in Shah Alam. I hope that all of us will enjoy success in our life lives and be friends forever.