I wrote a poem recently, for all women,
who have ever been left out of a project(my situation), or anything else, solely because of their sex.
I will not be a wallflower,
left standing forlornly,
beside the wall,
to watch the gay dancing go on.
If it is to be your hour,
profer your arm kindly,
take me from the hall,
and escort me into the salon.
Let the gay medley´s power,
dispel your mistrust.
Invite me to join in the hour!
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Women, Sex and Dance are a good subject for great poems, like yours. These subjects always will be reason of a controversy position, people didn't understand how much is important the freedom of thoughts.
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I'm a ordinary man so I'm speechless.haha
If I were there, I never would you be a wallflower.
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I love meeting like minded people, on italki! I posted a poem on facebook once and only my Mom and my Aunt Linda responded. Thank you, Ralph! After a lifetime of reading, I began writing toward the end of 2010. Being relatively new at this, your praise is much appreciated.
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Bravo!!! After all the quotations you have posted it is great to see some of your own work. Bravo !!!!
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