My city
I live in a small city surrounded of hills. There is a lake too very very nice. A tower over one of the hills look a valley where are the village. Since seventeenth age the tower was a castle but war destroyed it and only this tower don't break down.
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Hello,
My name is maris, which is really nice to get on this site, I took interest in you after reading your profile at (www.italki.com). ([email protected])
I believe age and distance has nothing to do with love, so just drop me an email through my private e-mail address ([email protected]), so that we can communicate better and I send you my images.
Thank you.
maris.
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My city
I live in a small city surrounded of by hills. There is a lake too, very very nice. A tower over one of the hills looks at a valley where are the village is. Since the seventeenth age century the tower was a castle but war destroyed it and only this tower don't didn't break down.
The last two sentences, I'm not sure exactly what you are trying to say but they probably could use a little more correction.
- Is the tower over the hill or does it look over the hill
- The last sentence could probably be rewritten a little, maybe (During the seventeenth century the tower was a castle but war destroyed everything but this tower.)
Let me know if you have questions.
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My city
I live in a small city surrounded of BY hills. There is a lake too, WHICH IS very very(BUT ONE 'VERY' IS ENOUGH FOR THE ENGLISH!!) nice. A tower over ON one of the hills lookS a OVER A valley where are the IS A village. Since IN THE seventeenth age 1700s (or 16th century) the tower was PART OF a castle but war destroyed it and only this tower don't break down.WAS NOT DESTROYED (OR - REMAINS)
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My City
I live in a small city that is surrounded by hills. There is also a lake. too It is very very nice. A tower on one of the hills overlooks (or "looks over") a valley where are the village a village in the valley. The tower was once part of a castle that was destroyed during war in the seventeenth century.
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