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My Roommate’s New Phone Last Tuesday, my roommate went from buying his new mobile phone. I was so happy for him since his old phone was old and sometimes cannot function well. Every time he answered calls from someone, there were always problem on answering the calls. It was funny and I just can hear his muttering because his problem cannot be helped unless he bought a new phone. Finally, the moment that I have been waiting so long had arrived. He suddenly showed his new phone. Thank goodness I said in my mind, finally he buys a new phone. Good for him. His new phone’s brand is Samsung. It is fully screen touch and come with 8 mega pixels camera. Besides, it can be connected to internet through wireless connection and have lots of other application. That time, I truly can see from his face how happy he was. There was a time when he asked me something about his new phone. He is actually kind of new to new phone’s technology especially android. I also not so familiar with android but I know a little because I am an ipod touch user. Both android and ipod touch mostly have same way to use especially in dealing with their applications. Both of them also have other common features which is an mp3 and mp4 player. The way of downloading the song and converting the video are totally the same. The only different between android and ipod touch is android can be use to call someone. Poor me but I think it is not a big problem for me for not having such that phone because most of the time I spent my time with my mp3 listening to my favorite song. I rarely use my phone because for me phone is not that important. Of course sometime, if there are any emergencies we need phone to call somebody but I think carrying a phone is a burden. Maybe it is because of my phone size. It is kind of big and I hate to see its shape appear from outside of pants when I put it in the pocket. The main reason I wrote this post is to congratulate my roommate for having his new phone. Congratulation!!!

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My Roommate’s New Phone

Last Tuesday, my roommate went from buying bought a his new mobile phone. I was so happy for him since his old phone was old and sometimes didn't function well. Every time he answered calls from someone, there were always problems on answering the calls. It was funny and I just couldn't can listen to his muttering because his problem could not  be helped unless he bought a new phone.

Finally, the moment that I have been waiting for so long had arrived. He suddenly showed his new phone. Thank goodness I said in my mind, finally he buys a new phone. Good for him. His new phone’s brand is Samsung. It is fully screen touch and comes with an 8 mega pixels camera. Besides, it can be connected to the internet through a wireless connection and has lots of other application. That time, I truly could see from his face how happy he was.

There was a time when he asked me something about his new phone. He is actually kind of new to new phone’s technology especially android. I am also not so familiar with android but I know a little because I am an ipod touch user. Both android and ipod touch mostly have the same way to use, especially in dealing with their applications. Both of them also have other common features which is an mp3 and mp4 player. The way of downloading the songs and converting the videos is are totally the same. The only difference between android and ipod touch is android can be used to call someone.

Poor me but I think it is not a big problem for me for not having such that phone because most of the time I spend my time with my mp3 listening to my favorite songs. I rarely use my phone because for me a phone is not that important. Of course sometimes, if there are any emergencies we need a phone to call somebody, but I think carrying a phone is a burden. Maybe it is because of my phone's size. It is kind of big and I hate to see its shape appear from outside of my pants when I put it in my pocket.

Wow, a lot of errors for you to make. 

The main reason I wrote this post is to congratulate my roommate for having his new phone. Congratulation!!!

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great roommate.

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