A Disappointing Net-friend
Last Satursday afternoon, i met the friend mentioned in my essays. I went to Nanpu district where his factory is. He's always telling me that he is busy preparing for starting his business on the phone. I was still holding a glimmer of hope for believing him one more time. So i went to Nanshu to meet him. It took me more than one hour to arrive at the destination. Before i started the journey, i texted him whether he was in his company and got a reply "yes". So i called him as soon as i arrived, and i heard the sound of subway. He must be in subway, i felt very angry about his dishonest. I was so disappointed that i decided to back. He guessed what i thought and apologized for his deeds and asked me to wait him. At last we met at the Nanpu subway stationsubway. But it meat nothing to me and i didn't want to contact him any more.
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A Disappointing Net-friend
Last Satursday afternoon, I met the friend mentioned in my essays. I went to Nanpu district where his factory is. He's always telling me that he is busy preparing to start his business on the phone. I was still holding a glimmer of hope for believing him one more time. So i went to Nanshu to meet him. It took me more than one hour to arrive at the destination. Before i started the journey, I texted to ask him whether he was in his company and got a reply "yes". So I called him as soon as I arrived, and I heard the sound of subway. He must be in a subway, I felt very angry about his dishonest. I was so disappointed that I decided to back. He guessed what I thought and apologized for his deeds and asked me to wait for him. At last we met at the Nanpu station subway. But it meat nothing to me and I don't want to contact him any more.
The pronoun I is always a capital letter, even if it is not at the beginning od a sentece. Your English is very good. I hope you can meet a much nicer friend who won't lie to you.
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Nothing beats getting to know someone in person.
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So what is thise Nanpu/Nanshu thing exactly? Some Shanghainese term? What did you expect to happen between you when you were going to him? You should feel lucky about it at least he did exist and wasn't like a pervert or a freak like me or anything.
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Honesty should be the bottom line. Just let it go.
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