First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I am Susanna,i am a girl working for a state-owned firm. I have some opportunities to meet foreiners     foreigners, basic comunication communication is ok for me, but i want to know more and want to make freinds with them. So i want to learn more.

The middle sentense is ok for casual communication, but it is gramatically incorrect. It should be ' I can do basic communication in English, but i want to improve more. I want to find some foreigners and make them my friends.'