First notebook entry: Introducing myself

First ,let me introduce myself .My name is Ann .J,you can call me Ann,I will be graduated on June this year ,in the mean time ,my job is a big big problem in my life now .Because ,I want to work in a foreign company ,I like to work with people from different country ,I like English and want to communicate fluentlly with others.
In my spare time ,I like going outside ,such as jogging ,taking photos .'cause I believe “Rest breeds rust”.Besides ,I am interested in reading ,by reading ,I can rich my lifetime ,can know the other world that I never know before .
OK, it's lunch time ,see you !

First, let me introduce myself.  My name is Ann.  I am graduating this year in June.  In the mean time, my job is troubling me a lot.  I want to work in a foreign company and I like to work with people from another country. I like English and want to be able to communicate well with others.  In my spare time, I like going outside to jog and take photos because I believe "rest breeds rust."  I am also interested in reading.  By reading, I can live longer and know another world that I have known before.  Ok, it's lunch time, see you later!