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Third Notebook Ok, one more time i'm here....and i still don't understand this....sorry But anywhere i will continue writting i don't know about what but i will. So..what can i say..my vacation are near, but the bad new is that it wont be a real vacation, I'm christian and my city is the organizer of a big convention for 3 days, and i'm part of that, so definetly in my vacation i will to have a lot of work, but of course whit a lot of fun too, meet people new and faces that since time ago not see, it will be good.

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Third Notebook

Ok, one more time i'm here.... [ it's not wrong, but we would usually say "I'm here once again or I'm here one more time]
 and i still don't understand this....sorry [I don't understand what "this" means - when we write we have to explain things in detail or be specific, then later in the same story or article we can use "this" because the reader already knows what "this" refers to]

But anywhere anyway i will continue writting, i don't know about what, but i will.

So..what can i say..my vacation are is near, but the bad newS is that it wont be a real vacation, [period] 
I'm christian Christian and my city is the organizer of a big, 3 day convention for 3 days, and i'm part of that, so definetly in during my vacation i will to have a lot of work, but of course whit with a lot of fun too, meeting new people new and seeing new faces that since time ago not see I have not seen for a long time - it will be good.

nice story...

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