Peace Will Be Upon Us
If you
Are a faithful believer,
Look for being a better human being,
Love you parents and neighbors
Practice charity,
Do your best in everything you do,
You are great, you are sublime.
If you think
Your faithis the only true
If you try to impose it to other,
Not see that other beliefs
Have the same roots,
Have the same God,
Have many things in common,
You are blind.
If you really understand your faith
And also other people faith,
Other people belief,
Other people conviction,
If you accept that the world and nature are made of differences
That your God made you unique
Other people are unique,
and you and the other have the right of being unique.
If you understand that
There are many interpretations,
Other people also have the same right you have.
You will be, for sure, more tolerant
You will really love you neighbor
And peace will be upon us.
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Peace Will Be Upon Us
If you
Are a faithful believer,
Look for being a better human being,
Love your parents and neighbours
Practice charity,
Do your best in everything you do,
You are great, you are sublime.
If you think
Your faith is the only truth
If you try to impose it on others,
Not seeing that other beliefs
Have the same roots,
Have the same God,
Have many things in common,
You are blind.
If you really understand your faith
And also other people's faith,
Other people's belief,
Other people's conviction,
If you accept that the world and nature are made of differences
That your God made you unique
Other people are unique,
and you and the others have the right (of being)/(to be) unique.
If you understand that
There are many interpretations,
Other people also have the same right you have.
You will be, for sure, more tolerant
You will really love your neighbour
And peace will be upon us.
Added a few things to Matts corrections :-)
'Your parents and neighbors' - 'your' is possesive. It shows that the parents and nieghbors being discussed are related to you (a little different than ownership, but a similar idea)
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Peace Will Be Upon Us
If you
Are a faithful believer,
Look for being a better human being,
Love your parents and neighbours
Practice charity,
Do your best in everything you do,
You are great, you are sublime.
If you think
Your faith is the only true
If you try to impose it on others,
Not see that other beliefs
Have the same roots,
Have the same God,
Have many things in common,
You are blind.
If you really understand your faith
And also other people faith,
Other people's belief,
Other people's conviction,
If you accept that the world and nature are made of differences
That your God made you unique
Other people are unique,
and you and the other have the right of being unique.
If you understand that
There are many interpretations,
Other people also have the same right you have.
You will be, for sure, more tolerant
You will really love you neighbour
And peace will be upon us.
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@Shaimaa, @Yosra, @çiçek - Thanks, dear friends. :)
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Peace be upon you and all us.Great words.
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I like your words... :))
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