Catching a cold

I am catching caught a cold when the cold season set in. I didn't go haven't been to see the a doctor; I think (that) it's such a trivial matter. I wear so many clothes (that) I look like a great bear. I am I'm always thirsty, so I drink a lot of water. I feel so tired and want to sleep. Every morning when I must have to to get up to work, I hope wish I really am were (note the subjunctive mood) really a great bear because of the great bear should hibernates in through the cold weather winter. But that’s just a my delusion (I'm not sure if this is a correct use of 'delusion'...). Luckily everyone around me are all concerned about my health. I am I'm expecting hoping for a sunshine sunny day to go to so I might get some exercise. In the new years I hope everybody will have a healthfuly body be in good health.

What I've written in pink are some words and phrases I feel sound more natural or pleasant when the original text is also acceptable. I feel that in such an informal piece as this, 'I'm' is preferable over 'I am'.

Please also note where I've struck through 'to go to' and replaced with 'so I might'. I feel that, here, 'to go to' sounds somewhat awkward. Using 'might' here may seem unusual, but here it has the same meaning as 'can', only it is more natural and pleasant.

Catch cold

I caught a cold when the winter set in. I didn’t go to see the doctor. I think that it is such a trivial matter. I wear many clothes and look like a great bear. I am always thirsty, so I drink a lot of water. I feel so tired and want to sleep. Every morning when I must to get up to work, I wish I am really a great bear, because of the great bear should hibernate in the cold weather. That’s just a delusion. Luckily everyone around me are all concerned about my health. I am expecting a sunny day to go to get some exercise. In the new year I hope everybody has a healthy body.

We have a saying, "Feed a cold, starve a fever." I recommend chicken soup for a cold. I wish you good health.