First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hello! 
I'm a chinese girl! English is my favorite language! I just graduated from university college and now I'm engaged in international trade.I like this work, I try my best to do better and better. In my free time, I will (like to) go shopping with (my) friends or have some reading. I hope I meet the man of my dreams this year,

I agreed with some of the corrections enSYS chose and added a few in. Parenthesis is optional, sounds more casual without the 'my'.

"I hope that a lucky man can be with me this year."
This statement is grammatically very clear, but the meaning is confusing. You wish for a lucky man specifically? Or do you mean in the sense that a guy would be lucky to have you? (as I'm sure he would)

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hello!
I'm a chinese girl ！English is my favorite language！I just graduated from University.I'm engaged in international trade.I like this work.I try my best to do better and better.In my free time,I will go shopping with my friends ,or read something.I hope I meet man of my dreams this year.