First notebook entry: Introducing myself

First,I should say,I'm an avtive girl. I like to make friends with others.Because I have just join this site.I hope to receive instructions from other friends.Now I'm waiting for your contact.If you want to know more about me,don't hesitate to chat with me.

Firstnotebook entry: Introducing myself

Firstly, I should said say, I'm an active girl. I would like to make friends with others. Because I was have just set foot to here join this site .I hope to receive the instructtions from other friends. Now I'm waiting for your contact. If you want to realise know me more, don't hesitate to chat with me.

To Leah:

I think "to set foot" is used when you've been to a real place. A website may not be appropriate.

And "the" in "the instructions" must be exclude. You should use "the" to mention one (or some) particular thing, for example "Following the instructions of my teacher helps me a lot."

Hope I can help :)

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

First,I should said say,I'm an avtive active girl. I like to make friends with others. Because I was just set foot to here.,I hope the instruct to learn from other friends.Now I waiting for you contact me.If you want to realise know more about me more,don't hesitate to chat with me.

Hi Leah! Nice to meet you!

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

First,I should said,I'm an active girl. I like to make friend with others.Because I was just set foot to here.I hope the instruct from other friends.Now I waiting for you contact.If you want to realise me more,don't hesitate to chat with me.