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Strange Love So strange is the way to love, love and jealous feelings, jealous fool, often inconvenient. We love and we are afraid, one day a fear of being alone, that follow a loved one on the road without present you with a passage to the same place. Feel love and anger, angry at not being understood, as if the loved one had an obligation to have the gift of foresight, and we could understand at least at that moment that we are more upset. We love and we often feel rejection,the simple fact of not being noticed the new haircut, new clothes, new attack. We love and we become mad, the crazy happiness for two, a colorful world made ​​for lovers. Roaring through life as if today was day one of the millions who still live. As strange form of love, we are one of many, many feelings, many desires, many plans ... Do not want to rule the love, I love to dominate us. For love is love, is all ... is sure, is the company, and friendship, and passion, is a child, is eternal. So this strange way of loving, I miss even the simplest verses of a poem, it has so many ways to write about love, some simple other complex, but all with the same sense, that love overcomes everything. http://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_embedded&v=KVTiDJYpmSk#!

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Strange Love

So strange is the way to of love, love and jealousy feelings, the jealous fool, often inconvenient.
We love and we are afraid of one day a fear of being alone, that to follow a loved one on the road without present you with a passage to the same place.
Feeling love and anger. Angry at not being understood, as if the loved one hads an obligation to have the gift of foresight, and we could can understand at leastat for that moment that we are more upset.
We love and we often feel rejection. The simple fact of being noticed the not noticing a new haircut, new clothes, new attack vigour? compassion?
We love and we become mad, the crazy happiness for two, a colorful world made for lovers.
Roaring through life as if today was day one of the millions who still live.
As strange form of as love is, we are it is one of many, many feelings, many desires, many plans ...
Do not want to rule the love, I love to dominate us. You cannot be more powerful than love, love dominates us?
For love is love, is that's all ... is sure, is Sure, it's the company, and the friendship, and the passion. It is a child; is eternal.
So this strange way of loving So strange is love. I miss even the simplest verses of a poem, it has so many ways to write about love, some simple, others complex, but all with the same sense, that love overcomes everything.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_embedded&v=KVTiDJYpmSk#!

 

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Really ambitious!

Maybe personify "loved one" to a person (use he/she)?

The parts in grey are things I don't really understand. The "?" after each part in grey is a suggestion of what I think you mean and what makes more sense, but that I'm not sure if that's the point you're trying to make.

 

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We live in a seesaw of feelings, now we can be well, but in a minute everything can change .... I know you'll find something wonderful for her, because you always have beautiful words and beautiful music to track our feeling. :)
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@ Adri. I'm trying to think of a happy one for Arwa. She needs some cheering up.
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Jura, always bringing us you the soundtrack of the moment.
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Not at the moment Adri, they're just some of my favourite songs.

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