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Strange Love
So strange is the way to of love, love and jealousy feelings, the jealous fool, often inconvenient.
We love and we are afraid of one day a fear of being alone, that to follow a loved one on the road without present you with a passage to the same place.
Feeling love and anger. Angry at not being understood, as if the loved one hads an obligation to have the gift of foresight, and we could can understand at leastat for that moment that we are more upset.
We love and we often feel rejection. The simple fact of being noticed the not noticing a new haircut, new clothes, new attack vigour? compassion?
We love and we become mad, the crazy happiness for two, a colorful world made for lovers.
Roaring through life as if today was day one of the millions who still live.
As strange form of as love is, we are it is one of many, many feelings, many desires, many plans ...
Do not want to rule the love, I love to dominate us. You cannot be more powerful than love, love dominates us?
For love is love, is that's all ... is sure, is Sure, it's the company, and the friendship, and the passion. It is a child; is eternal.
So this strange way of loving So strange is love. I miss even the simplest verses of a poem, it has so many ways to write about love, some simple, others complex, but all with the same sense, that love overcomes everything.
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Really ambitious!
Maybe personify "loved one" to a person (use he/she)?
The parts in grey are things I don't really understand. The "?" after each part in grey is a suggestion of what I think you mean and what makes more sense, but that I'm not sure if that's the point you're trying to make.
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